Devil in the Dark

Jillian McCoy
Darkness makes demands on me

It insists that I sleep

Smothers me in velvet black

Shushes me wordlessly

Can you see the shadows watching?

Night is a beast of many faces

flush with terrors hiding just beneath the bed

Streetlights making empty promises

Fearing I'll be swallowed up

and spat out next morning's headline

Published by Jillian McCoy

I'm a freelance writer and college student based in Philadelphia. Though I'll write just about anything as a "pen for hire," I specialize in short-form content written for the web. Some of my favorite subj...  View profile

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  • R.C. Johnson4/23/2010

    :)! rcj

  • Kent Tompkins4/21/2010

    Great poem. Thanks for sharing. - Kent

  • leroy coffie4/21/2010

    reminds me last night, I couldn't sleep

  • Mark Hudziak4/20/2010

    You expressed the character's overpowering fear very well in just a few words. Well done.

  • Jack Wellman4/20/2010

    I have not read your other poems (yet!) but this one is just so incredibly good. I'm an author and this is publishing quality of the best I have seen. Well done, no, better; brilliant.

  • L B Woodgate4/20/2010

    I think this is your best yet for me Jillian. Great allegories

  • J90204/20/2010

    I enjoyed the dark atmospheric quality of the poem. Just laying down and falling asleep seemed terrifying to the subject of the poem.

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