Distant Smoldering

Charlene S Noto
Distant Smoldering

Your thoughts brought lusty waves to me today;
I smoldered under their hidden touches.
My own thoughts flew to sun's setting rays,
The time before sun dips into the sea,
The edge between the night and evening's flushes,
That late afternoon when you first kissed me.

Though earthly miles are long between our feet,
Expanse of sea can't quench these endless fires.
Our thoughts entwine and have no need of streets
But touch with haste and speed of crimson blush.
I felt your pulse, your eyes and your desire,
On fire, I touched my throat your lips did brush.

That late afternoon when you first kissed me,
On fire, I touched my throat your lips did brush.

(republished from my original of 4/30/2006 at WDC)

Published by Charlene S Noto

Currently resides with her husband and two labs, Max and Molly, in the US Pacific NW. Enjoying both her writing and her quilting, she is learning to live creatively with Multiple Sclerosis.  View profile

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  • Sheri Fresonke Harper7/3/2009

    Smoking! Very intense :)

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper7/3/2009

    Smoking! Very intense :)

  • freakmamma6/24/2009

    Awesome (as usual!)

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