Dripping Away

Lisa R. Strong
Early morning rises;
Red clouds on the horizon;
Off to work I go;
Riding on a crowded bus;
Worked so hard all day;
Dirt layers my skin;
Sweat pours from my brow;
My clothes cling to me;
I cannot wait to get home;
Pouring rain falls down;
Soaking me again;
I curse the sky;
But the sky is laughing;
I got home after three;
Stepped into a cleansing shower;
Soaping away the day;
Then I felt a chill;
It is not cold, but I am freezing;
I dress in a hurry;
But, it does no good;
I am stuffy; I cannot breathe;
And I realize that I have lost;
Defeated by nature;
My tissue box travels with me;
From room to room;
My head feel like an overinflated balloon;
Water runs from my eyes and my nose;
As I am coughing and sneezing through;
A ruined three-day weekend

Published by Lisa R. Strong

I was born and raised in Binghamton NY. I have been writing short stories since I was eight years old, and poetry since I was a teenager. I also write prayers, meditations, and opinion articles. My dre...  View profile

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  • Mary E. Coe7/10/2008

    Love the sketch it goes well with the poem. Nice job.

  • cathiesblogs7/7/2008

    I hate summer colds !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • mimpi7/7/2008

    you get well soon....love

  • Catdog7/6/2008

    Sounds like your weekend was similar to mine. Although, I didn' t have to work, I cannot wait to go. Hoping the events of last week do not once again unfold. Hope your week starts better come tomorrow.

  • Charlie K7/6/2008

    They are the worst.

  • Lisa Renee.7/6/2008

    Oddly enough, inspite of my allergies, I don't have headcolds very often. If they come, it is usually in the summer or early spring. It has been two years since I have had one this bad. Thanks for reading, everyone.

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA7/6/2008

    Very nice sketch of nature through your nice poem didi. More than well done.

  • Charles Reynolds7/5/2008

    Summer colds are the worst. Great flow here.

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