Editing David Foster Wallace

In December 1993, David Foster Wallace printed three copies of a manuscript he had taken to calling the "longer thing" and gave one to his editor, Michael Pietsch, one to a woman he was trying to impress and one to Steven Moore, a friend and the managing editor of the Review of Contemporary Fiction, whose edits and cuts Wallace wished to compare with Pietsch's. The manuscript, which Little, Brown and Company would publish as Infinite Jest in 1996, was heavy (it required both of Moore's hands to carry) and, Moore recalled, unruly:

"It's a mess - a patchwork of different fonts and point sizes, with numerous handwritten corrections/additions on most pages, and paginated in a nesting pattern (e.g., p. 22 is followed by 22A-J before resuming with p. 23, which is followed by 23A-D, etc). Much of it is single-spaced, and what footnotes existed at this stage appear at the bottom of pages. (Most of those in the published book were added later.) Several states of revision are present: some pages are early versions, heavily overwritten with changes, while others are clean final drafts. Throughout there are notes in the margins, reminders to fix something or other, adjustments to chronology (which seems to have given Wallace quite a bit of trouble), even a few drawings and doodles."

Wallace followed some of Pietsch and Moore's suggestions and cut about 40 pages from the first draft of the manuscript, but before publication he added more than 200 pages of additional material, including an opening chapter that many critics have praised as the novel's best and more than 100 pages of (often footnoted) endnotes. Editing Wallace could be demanding, and those who attempted it found themselves faced with the difficulty of correcting a man with a prodigious understanding of the byzantine syntactical and grammatical rules of the English language. The American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language named Wallace to its usage panel and The Oxford American Writer's Thesaurus published his "word notes" commenting on usage rules. In an essay subtitled "Democracy, English, and the Wars over Usage" that Wallace wrote for Harper's in 2001, he diagnosed himself as a "SNOOT," an acronym standing for either "Sprachgefuhl Necessitates Our Ongoing Tendance" or "Syntax Nudniks of Our Time" (depending, he joked, "on whether or not you were one"). His mother, Sally-"a Comp teacher [who wrote] remedial usage books and ... a SNOOT of the most rabid and intractable sort"-instilled in Wallace the type of grave respect for language that drove him, upon the discovery of solecisms in his students' writing, to teach "a three-week Emergency Remedial Usage Unit, during which my demeanor is basically that of somebody, teaching HIV prevention to intravenous-drug users."

In short, Wallace had mastered the minutiae of the writing craft. Gerry Howard, the editor of his freshman novel, The Broom of the System, recalled receiving informal correspondence from Wallace. "His letters to me were just incredible, page after page," he said. "Single-spaced, typed out, no typos, no grammatical mistakes." Ruth Reichl, who edited Wallace's essay "Consider the Lobster" for Gourmet Magazine said she edited the essay "barely at all." "I think he's just used to having his stuff run as is," she said. "But he argues over every comma. I mean-literally-every comma."

When placed against his shy, deferential demeanor, Wallace's tendency to write well-reasoned screeds to his editors arguing against even the most niggling alterations to his writing became an item of amusement to editors. Glenn Kenny, who edited Wallace's essays on David Lynch and the pornography industry for Premiere Magazine, recalled Wallace's "almost paradoxical" nature. "You knew he was speaking from a rock-solid position in terms of his beliefs and inclinations," Kenny said, "but by the same token he was in many ways deferential-it took some time for me to convince him that he did not have to call me Mr. Kenny, and that, in fact, it made me incredibly uncomfortable to be called Mr. Kenny." Pietsch said he thought Wallace felt uncomfortable around authority figures and also insisted on addressing him by his surname. "I got him to come to my house for a cookout once," Pietsch said, "and he spent much of the time playing with my kids, who were 3 and 6 at the time." This demureness was absent in his letters about his work, which were arch and confident. Pietsch saved Wallace's correspondence on Infinite Jest, and he shared some of Wallace's comments: "p. 52-This is one of my personal favorite Swiftian lines in the whole manuscript, which I will cut, you rotter"; "Pp. 327-330. Michael, have mercy. Pending an almost Horacianly persuasive rationale on your part, my canines are bared on this one"; and "Pp. 739-748. I've rewritten it-for about the 11th time-for clarity, but I bare teeth all the way back to the 2nd molar on cutting it."

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