Everything is Beautiful

Butter Face

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She had funny charm

I got next to her

She had an average face

With a killer figure

I got next to her

She moved confident that the ride was divine

With a killer figure

I knew she was lots of fun

She moved confident that the ride was divine

She had an average face

Her eye was lazy

She had funny charm

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  • Harry Gunawan12/24/2007

    You always describe and analyze women thoroughly and personally bro. I like this one too!

  • Sabrina Favoriti12/24/2007

    I like it :)

  • Lisa Renee.12/23/2007

    I like the line "She had funny charm" Very nice!

  • Kady Burney12/23/2007

    Again, you paint her so beautifully! What a lovely poem. I love the words, "She had funny charm." great job!

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