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  • A.M. Morgan3/30/2008

    Wow I could feel the intensity in the poem as Carrie stated. It appears you have a way with words and using the least amount of them to get your point across.

  • Tye Martin3/28/2008

    Wow!!!! Extremely and extrordinary....powerful. Your analogies are priceless. I love the way you use the word play, and I appreciate you baring your soul, it's beautiful and brave.........please.......keep blessin us!!! Peace

  • Julia Bodeeb White3/24/2008

    Very strong poem. Welcome to AC.

  • Carrie Harris3/23/2008

    Very nice and intense poem. Feel free to read some of my poems. I could feel your passion in your words. I look forward in reading your other articles.

    Welcome to the AC community and I hope you will have a pleasant experience here.

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