Evolution

Haiku in 3, 5, 3

Sharon Cohen
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on the tongue

sweetness awaking

human view
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Notes:

Sharon Cohen creates Haiku in non-traditional 3, 5, 3 pattern to practice the art of pithiness and to break writer's block. She also bends and breaks the rules for traditional Haiku, adapting them to her own design as follows:

Haiku do not tell stories and almost never involve people's actions. Haiku simply convey an abstract concept -- usually an emotion.

Haiku will generally present contrast. Creating these contrasts can be the hardest part. The Haiku poet wants a perfect catalyst to spark the right emotional note.

Haiku usually focus around imagery. Sharon Cohen's Haiku is often paired with a photograph from which the Haiku is inspired.

Challenge for the Reader:

Relating to the photograph provided, the reader is challenged to submit their own Haiku of any style and pattern, in the comments section below.

Published by Sharon Cohen

Having dabbled in multiple careers and innumerable hobbies, I have finally realized that my greatest earthly endeavor is that of being a wife. I am an helpmeet - from the Hebrew work "ezer" - meaning to sur...  View profile

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  • Alisha Wilson1/29/2007

    Far From Home; Dancing in a Suit; People Suck

  • Donna1/29/2007

    I was going to try this one, but I'm laughing too much at Stephen's..I may come back and try later :-)

  • SHARON COHEN1/28/2007

    Summer - that is incredibly insightful. Awesome.

  • Summer Minor1/28/2007

    On a leash
    who is the staged
    monkey now

  • SHARON COHEN1/28/2007

    Ok - this one does it. I think I need to forward all of these photos to you and let you post these under your banner! THIS is TOO funny! You must know how the monkey was behaving - jumping around all over the place like .... well, like he had to pee!

  • Stephen Joltin1/28/2007

    Red monkey
    On My Knee
    Has to pee

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