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  • Imagine5/9/2008

    Simple, precise but says much. Excellent!

  • foggynotion5/5/2008

    i like the plot twist that you added. the poem sucked me right in and then you dropped the hook

  • 3lilangels5/4/2008

    Fantastic poem!!!!!!!!!

  • C-Love5/1/2008

    Nice ;o)

  • Hearten Soul4/30/2008

    What a powerful message. You have quite the talent for imagery and for touching the soul.

  • Adam Michael Luebke4/30/2008

    Short but sweet. Many of us could use this poem's lesson. Why can't we just be happy with ourselves, and appreciate the very things that make us who we are? Nice work! And thanks for your nice comment on my piece.

  • April Lorier4/29/2008

    Oh, I do so much love the hook at the end! Excellent!!! Have you seen the movies "Perfect Stranger" or "Another Perfect Stranger"? If not, check them out online. They are my two favorite movies of all time and they are excellently produced by Christians. And the stranger? Well, it's Jesus, silly!

  • Louisa3644/29/2008

    This is amazing! You write wonderful poetry.

  • Cheryl Myers4/29/2008

    I love meeting strangers, having a small talk and connection. It's like maybe the only time you will ever cross that souls path. It's a unique feeling.

  • Momie Tullottes4/29/2008

    Simple, yet powerful at the same time. Excellent as always. :-)

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