Fancy Eyes

Patrick W. Marsh
No matter or molecule could morph the treasure more
the eyes of a child,
like waves to the shore.

Older it's easier to belong to some academy
or learning where every object and its detail
is as harshly real as it's symmetry.
Nightmares become explained,
and dreams become controlled.
Shadows lose their edge and creaks,
and hallow cries in the dark become
explained in a chain of rational thinking.
Footsteps in the woods become animals,
and cries in the gloom only the wind.
How our eyes turn petrified and cool?
Like a bending phantom would take them,
and in exchange for some knowledge
we loose legitimate fantasy.
Age opens and closes violently and quietly,
doors in a drafty mansion.
We get caught in the moving and bending.
No longer would that mansion,
hold any devil beneath the floor
or wraith in the attic singing.
Just old boxes with weight shifting
and rats running back and forth
on wooden beams up high in dusty air.
In time our eye's want to return to the notion
of possibility, where in reality anything is possible.
Our eyes cry for this, an unknown ailment,
till nostalgia wrenches us.
And our dreams involve only memory.

No matter or molecule could morph the treasure more
our eyes of a child,
like waves to the shore.

Published by Patrick W. Marsh

A science fiction fantasy writer from Minnesota. Currently finishing the final draft of a novel and publishing consistently on Associated Content. Completely obsessed with creative writing and producing wri...  View profile

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  • Laura Cone5/7/2011

    super

  • Wilma Jammer4/5/2011

    My eyes give out a lot of attitude.

  • Jeffrey L. Campbell4/5/2011

    Oh, to see with as much innocence now as I did with the eyes of a child.

  • RANDY SHARPE4/1/2011

    Another good one! The eyes and imagination when we were children are limitless

  • RANDY SHARPE4/1/2011

    Another good one! The eyes and imagination when we were children are limitless

  • Lori Gunn4/1/2011

    excellent - thanks for sharing

  • Mary Oberg3/31/2011

    A bit scary-might be expanded at Halloween time.

  • Maria Malone3/31/2011

    Well done, great imagery!

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