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Far Away

A Haiku for Dylan in Two Parts

Louisa Burgess

Missing you grow and
see new things like birds flying
you are far away

Not any where near
all through the spring and summer
you are far away

Published by Louisa Burgess

Life long NYer. Expressing myself through the written word has been my lifelong hobby and vocation. Somehow I managed to raise two sons and actually worked for a living! Recently moved to Texas!Louisa Burges...  View profile

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  • Baconator7/24/2008

    Awe.. distance can suck sometimes!

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA7/23/2008

    Very sweet and nice words !

  • mimpi7/23/2008

    Heartfelt and sweet!!

  • Morton Templeton7/21/2008

    sorry some kink of clinch I can not seem to post any comments either yesterday 7/20 or today 7/21 tried fro two different computers loved this though nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 3lilangels7/21/2008

    So deep and your grandson is so lucky!!!!

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky7/21/2008

    So thoughtful.

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper7/20/2008

    Nice poem :) Sheri

  • Momma J7/20/2008

    How expressive! Great job. Your grandson is fortunate to have you as a grandparent.

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