Feeding a Cold

J L Carey Jr
The fingers
Fed
Holding the sandwich
These digits
That grasped
Handles
Handled by hands
Scratching ears
Digging,
Fondling areas
Picking
Brushing pants
Carrying
Dusty parts
Oily pieces
Splashing,
Spilling coffee cups
Catching sneezes
Hands
Handling handles
The tips
The prints
In ghostly gross unions
Touching,
Unknowingly
The fingers
Fed
Holding the sandwich

Published by J L Carey Jr

J L Carey Jr, Author of the book Turning Pages, is a writer and an artist living in Michigan with his wife and three children. He holds an MFA in Creative Writing from National University and a BA in Englis...  View profile

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  • Paul Rance2/22/2010

    You've given me an urge to wear gloves all the time!

  • mimpi11/23/2009

    Another form, a common place topic but a fascinating explorations on both! Well done!

  • Christine Bruness11/5/2009

    It's unavoidable, isn't it? Well said here. Excellent read. Hope all is well with you.

  • Heather Carreiro10/25/2009

    Nice imagery.

  • Jenn Waite10/17/2009

    Perfect!! Well done.

  • Shirley Mandel10/16/2009

    This is your scariest poem yet, considering this wicked flu season that we are experiencing now. You have a great way of hitting the nail on the head.

  • Paul Rance10/15/2009

    Great imagery again, Jeff. You make mundane, everyday things come alive.

  • Walton S. Tissot10/14/2009

    perfect!

  • Walton S. Tissot10/14/2009

    perfect!

  • RipDiction10/13/2009

    Made wanna continuously wash my hands....Kudos JL great work!

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