Flash Fiction Contest: Perfect Confusion

Loki Morgan
Someone was knocking at the door. Each tap echoed like a gong inside my mind. The rhythm was painfully hypnotic. The door opened and a shrill voice added a nauseating melody.

Who is this lady and why is she talking so loud?


I looked around and realized this was not my house. I pulled myself up and using the strange lady for balance, stumbled out the door before it slammed shut.

My eyes flew open. I rolled over and turned off the alarm. Each night the dream was the same but the song was different, mimicking whatever music was playing when the alarm went off. I was sure the dream meant something but what, I had no clue.

I hit the shower and turned my thoughts on what meetings I had that day. With my blackberry in hand I left for work. The day went as scheduled with no major mishaps. Riding home in my baby blue Audi TT I couldn't help but think that life was going pretty well. I caught a slight smile in the rear view.

I changed into my comfortable clothes as soon as I stepped in the door. As usual I sat on my overstuffed chair and snuggled into my soft clothes. My head fell back and my eyes closed.

My eyes flew open. The smell of urine made me gag. My body was sore and I was snuggled up to hard concrete. I looked at the street but had no clue where I was until I turned around. Behind me was the door.

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Loki Morgan is a Microsoft Certified Professional with over ten years experience in the Information Technology field including technical writing. Morgan has published online content with a focus on compute...  View profile

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  • rmharrington6/5/2010

    Confused i am. Are you trying out for the next "Lost"? Just kidding. This is slick.

  • Shirley Mandel9/16/2009

    Scary story! :)

  • Amanda Cartwright9/6/2009

    This is the first fiction work by you that I've read. I'm very impressed!

  • Lazy Murphy9/3/2009

    Great story! I want more. :-)

  • Siew Cheng Hoe8/31/2009

    scary

  • Dan Reveal8/22/2009

    This is great writing, Loki!!

  • Nikki8/21/2009

    Good entry! I'm having fun reading all the contest entries. Good luck :)

  • Bat Canary8/21/2009

    Fascinating--a story within a story within a story. Which one is real?

  • David A. Reinstein, LCSW8/17/2009

    Nice writing. If I don't win with my piece "Dear Occupant," I hope that you do!!

  • Jennifer Wagner8/15/2009

    Intriguing! Good luck!

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