Who is this lady and why is she talking so loud?
I looked around and realized this was not my house. I pulled myself up and using the strange lady for balance, stumbled out the door before it slammed shut.
My eyes flew open. I rolled over and turned off the alarm. Each night the dream was the same but the song was different, mimicking whatever music was playing when the alarm went off. I was sure the dream meant something but what, I had no clue.
I hit the shower and turned my thoughts on what meetings I had that day. With my blackberry in hand I left for work. The day went as scheduled with no major mishaps. Riding home in my baby blue Audi TT I couldn't help but think that life was going pretty well. I caught a slight smile in the rear view.
I changed into my comfortable clothes as soon as I stepped in the door. As usual I sat on my overstuffed chair and snuggled into my soft clothes. My head fell back and my eyes closed.
My eyes flew open. The smell of urine made me gag. My body was sore and I was snuggled up to hard concrete. I looked at the street but had no clue where I was until I turned around. Behind me was the door.
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Loki Morgan is a Microsoft Certified Professional with over ten years experience in the Information Technology field including technical writing. Morgan has published online content with a focus on compute... View profile
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19 Comments
Post a CommentConfused i am. Are you trying out for the next "Lost"? Just kidding. This is slick.
Scary story! :)
This is the first fiction work by you that I've read. I'm very impressed!
Great story! I want more. :-)
scary
This is great writing, Loki!!
Good entry! I'm having fun reading all the contest entries. Good luck :)
Fascinating--a story within a story within a story. Which one is real?
Nice writing. If I don't win with my piece "Dear Occupant," I hope that you do!!
Intriguing! Good luck!