The smell of a wet window pane,
as Summer rain cools the air.
The faint pre-Autumn fluttering of leaves,
caught on an August breeze.
Whistling lips-
pursed and parted,
perfectly pushing breath
into a musical duet with the radio.
Dead Park,
with fireflies and foreign exchange students.
Cameron Brown Park and the dock
where I childishly carved my pocket knife into it.
Certain couches-
usually stiffly covered by abrasive material,
but comfortably cushioned.
Motown music-
meant to incite fire in the blood
with dance movements:
simple, sexy swaying.
Magnolias trees in bloom-
sweetly scented and beckoning to be climbed.
Bradford Pear trees("cumtrees").
Guitar strings against my fingertips.
Rusty bedsprings.
A candle, recently extinguished and still smoking. . .
These are the things that remind me of them-
the Old Lovers that are preserved by my memories.
as Summer rain cools the air.
The faint pre-Autumn fluttering of leaves,
caught on an August breeze.
Whistling lips-
pursed and parted,
perfectly pushing breath
into a musical duet with the radio.
Dead Park,
with fireflies and foreign exchange students.
Cameron Brown Park and the dock
where I childishly carved my pocket knife into it.
Certain couches-
usually stiffly covered by abrasive material,
but comfortably cushioned.
Motown music-
meant to incite fire in the blood
with dance movements:
simple, sexy swaying.
Magnolias trees in bloom-
sweetly scented and beckoning to be climbed.
Bradford Pear trees("cumtrees").
Guitar strings against my fingertips.
Rusty bedsprings.
A candle, recently extinguished and still smoking. . .
These are the things that remind me of them-
the Old Lovers that are preserved by my memories.
Published by Lucky M Diaz
Lucky M. Diaz is a freelance webwriter and an expressionist who writes informative articles, reviews, poetry, prose, and short stories. She is Bilingual(Spanish/English), is a Licensed Insurance Producer in... View profile
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49 Comments
Post a Commentawesome poetry .. loved your way of writing and expressing thoughts .
Really enjoyed the memories as I read through your poem, somethings we can all relate to. Wonderfully done.
Talented work:)
Wonderfully done!
This was my favorite of yours, but I think the ending lines reveal too much. Leave it a bit more open for interpetation. Otherwise, very nice imagery, and a good soft, subtle rhythm.
I wanna be a memory! LOL!!
Beautiful, love your illustration and how I could feel all of it.
Thanks for sharing this.
Nice poem.
Good one!