For Valentine's Day

Louisa Burgess
Be my Valentine he said
as she wondered what could be
so wrong with his head

I love the way you laugh
and the blueness of your eyes
oh my she said, you must be daft

He smiled and reached for her hand
she took it and looked on as
he drew a heart in the sand

Another heart crossed the first
that is you and that is me
she felt as though she would burst

Be my Valentine he said
gladly she heard her heart racing
with happy thoughts of what's ahead

Published by Louisa Burgess

Life long NYer. Expressing myself through the written word has been my lifelong hobby and vocation. Somehow I managed to raise two sons and actually worked for a living! Recently moved to Texas!Louisa Burges...  View profile

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  • Cynthia Martin2/16/2009

    This is so cool. Cyn

  • Mags2/10/2009

    Beautifully done!

  • Michael K. Miller2/9/2009

    Great, Louisa! Love's anticipation is one of the great drivers of Life. Be well, Michael

  • 3lilangels2/8/2009

    aww so beautiful!

  • Momma J2/7/2009

    So beautiful. Great job.

  • Sheryl Young2/6/2009

    Isn't that pounding heart feeling great??!! (Until you're older, then you'd better get to a doctor!)

  • Nikki2/5/2009

    i like it!!

  • mimpi2/4/2009

    so beautiful!

  • Tony Vega2/4/2009

    Very nice my talented friend. Happy Valentine's Day!

  • Kay Whittenhauer2/4/2009

    How sweet! :)

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