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Brandon Coats
Chapter #1 - The Lost city.

Excalibur slowly creeps towards the bushes to get a glance at the large metal like creatures getting closer and closer. Each step it get's more and more dangerous for the people in the village.Excalibur hears a crackling of leaves from footsteps coming behind him. He draws out a large stick he found on the ground from his side. slowly without making any noise, and in an instant turns around. Waving the stick at the persons throat behind him. Then Ex takes a closer look and notices it's Derek. He had a small lit torch, with news of what was going on..."shhh", said Derek as a creature came very close to the bush they are hiding in. "They are very sensitive even for the slightest sound".

"I lost all my Gadgets beside the Time Machine I think we should better rescue others before tying to do anything else. Either we must escape or help future guys fight these monsters. Maybe you can cover me while I go inside" said Derek.

So, Both of them went forward from bush to bush keeping their Laser daggers ready for anything that can happen.Suddenly they heard a loud noise. Like an explosion of some sort. Derek and Ex looked around. They soon caught sight of Nandos running towards them. "What happened?" asked Ex. Then someone else a bit far behind Nandos appeared, it was Aqueel. "We found a way to escape, unfortunately Xtraze was recaptured in the process" replied Nandos. "I must say though, we planned the escape plan very well, we had to fight with 2 Troll-Bots without any weapons. Somehow Aqeel and I have managed to de-assemble it" XTRaze was fighting with one himself and was losing the fight as noone can manage a Troll-bot by himself. Good thing we jumped into the middle and all three of us attacked and destroyed it."

"We were running towards the fence and four some unusual kinds of creatures came after us and got XTRaze. We had to leave him as we were blown out of the place by a Force bomb" Said Aqeel " They didn't do any harm to him and took him back to the cell. I think they need some information about earth's history 100 years ago and that is our real time.

Then they heard a sudden sound, "What the hell is that?" asked Aqueel. "I dunno, it sounded to me like a firework" replied Nandos. "What? Are you dumb Nandos?? That was a giant alien spaceship that has lost flight and crashed, according to my calculations" corrected Derek. Soon Derek (with Ex) got into a row with Nandos (and Aqueel) about what the sound was.

As they fought about this misleading mystery the four were unaware of what was creeping towards them. "Derek, what's up man, Whats wrong with you ?",.. "I... uh.." Derek fell down on the ground, fainted.

"arghhh, My back,.. Where am I ?" He asked himself and was shocked when he heard a most familiar voice behind his back. "XTRaze ... ?, How did you escape ?", "I think I never escaped dude, Check the place where you are now" That was the reply he got.

"Others will be up in a few minutes, I hope" And by that time I think you can think of a way to get out of this cell. Its protected by common steel but do not ever touch it. I have tried it myself.", Said XTRaze.
"looks like others are getting up, And by the who is he ?" said Derek, " I think he is also a prisoner, but let him wake up first."
"What do you think we can do when we are ready ?, Can we use this way to get out of here. ? Maybe Aqeel can squeeze through this gap"

Aqeel being majorly skinny squeezed right through the bars. "Alright lemme find out where these damn keys are so we can be free" said Aqeel. "LOOK OUT"! screams EX. Aqeel quickly moves as he sees the man behind him. He looks franticly for something to beat the gate keeper with, but all he could find was a bucket. So he grabs it and screams out "AHHHHHHHH"!

Aqeel only had time to throw the Bucket shaped thing but he never knew what is it. When it hit the Enemy, Sparks flew from him and the team knew what is going to happen even if they do not Know anything about this mysterious world. The robot moved slow and the team found that the bucket like thing was a Bomb.

"It's gonna Blow !!!!"
"Aqeel pass the key Quick !!"
"Here it is"
"Everybody run as fast as you can towards the Exit over there and ExCal and I can carry him"
"Nandos I think you can drag Aqeel and lets go, go go..."

So, the Time travelers ran as fast as they can through the narrow way and just after they were safely outside of the Place, they heard a Big Bang and they had no need to look back at the mystery prison.

Aqeel, "I never would of believed buckets could save my life." Excalibur, "Me too man, but this world is crazy.." XTRaze,"Alright guys keep it down we don't know what could be on this crazy Island."

*BOOOOM* XTRaze, "What are we waiting for RUNNN!" Aqeel, "What was that thing." Excalibur, "Shut up and run!" Robot, "Stop now or you wil be shot at in 3-2-1." Excalibur, "Take cover it's firing!" Aqueel, "There in the bushes!"

XTRaze, "Hey guys... get down theres a whole army of them right over there" Aqeel, "Oh, man we are in trouble..."

"Hey look over there, we are saved" A Massive army of humans were running towards the Robots and During this distraction the 5 with their new friend went away and saw the robots facing their END.

"Look there are a few over , in the bushes !!" they heard and only had a few seconds to Jump away from the bushes to save their Lives.

"We are not Machines !!" Shouted ExCalibur as loud as he can, And the five were again tied up and taken away by this new team. They were traveling towards the mountains and the 5 never knew what lies behind that.

"Sorry for the Bad welcome, but it is not our fault." Said an old Man in their team and they were un-tied.

The time travelers were astonished to find a Complete City ruined on their way and they were told that this had been one of the Greatest Cities ruled by Humans. And their fellow Prisoner is supposed to be the Leader of this Great city. At last the team found some new friends...

Published by Brandon Coats

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  • XTraze5/15/2007

    Hey,
    This story only belongs to my Forum members so please let me know who you are ?

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