Free flowing thoughts
Forget me nots
Future dreams
And though it seems
Silly to present on page
Thoughts that come as
I engage with pen in hand
I don't erase a single word
For free flowing thoughts
However absurd
Are just that
They come to mind like
The pages in a book
Or the smell of perfume
A glimpse inside
Just for the ride
Free flowing thoughts
Might be better to hide
But I put them to page
Like I think of this now
My pillow is soft
And my comforter Thou
I will not forget
His Name as yet
Nor will I tarry on what to say
For free flowing thought
Is meant to bray
As a horse when
He sees His Master or a
Chorus in such a disaster
At first attempt
I do not preempt
But let free flowing thoughts
Have there way.
Epilogue
Sometimes I just have to begin to write to get the juices flowing, like warm up exercise before a big race. I just feel like seeing where my mind will go. When I do this it usually presents itself in poetry or prose; probably for its sing-songy-ness. It's simple and direct, quite like my mind when relaxed. For better or worse I write to rehearse writing things more in-depth. Perhaps it is just my inner child come out to play for a few moments before I research astrophysics for a book. Whatever the case, I thought I'd share this with you. It's a crude form of poetry with not one word erased.
My fingers flew through it as my mind lazily pondered on letting my thoughts flow. Perhaps this will help other writers or artists in some way. That we should not get stuck with the 'work' of our medium but sometimes play like children; letting the clay move on its own just to feel the squish through our fingers or paint with our toes letting them go to feel the canvas as we feel what is in our soul. It can be quite cathartic to let the hand or thought 'just be' without purpose for anything great or worthy of praise. I'm not sure where this will lead me today. Sometimes it leads to great ideas or just to the strength to finish writing on a topic I'm not crazy about. After all artists have to eat, at least on occasion.
Published by Loraine Alkire
Loraine Alkire is a freelance writer and cultural humorist living in Southern California. Alkire has had three amazing careers and a lifetime's worth of experiences to draw from in love, laughter, playtime... View profile
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8 Comments
Post a CommentBravo to you on this one. My free-flowing thoughts would sound so disjointed, people might think I had several personalities living inside me.
Great usage on free flowing writing- it is the best way to write for sure. The best poetry, letters, and articles are produced when you don't take pause.
Free flowing is the only way to write. Love the topic!
I do this sometimes, too. :)
I always write with free flowing thought. It's the easiest way to do it.
Nice, flowing poem and ingteresting picture.
Good luck with this!
This is awesome Loraine =0)