Friday Haiku for Brunch

Nature and Human Nurture Through the Concise 3-line Japanese Influenced Form

Deonils
Friday Haiku ... for brunch

snakes' recent shedding ...

rats, worms ... make full habitat -

on man-made salt bags!

Published by Deonils

I became a teacher in South Africa; since then I have worked in government, schools and higher education. My small business utilises my teacher-training & adult literacy interests/skills.  View profile

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  • Roberta Baxter7/12/2009

    Precicely and definitely a great Haiku.TX

  • Deonils7/11/2009

    Good morning --happy weekend Ladies and gents. Thanks for your visits. The poem described what I saw: snakes skins, rats nests, worms, crawlers and a complete ecosystem on bags of salt for de-icing in winter. (Sorry the sunshine states residents do not store bags of salt for de-icing). Shalom/Blessings

  • carol gibson7/11/2009

    I dunno - I think this is too sophisticated for me. It's probably what Tina said in her comment below.

  • Carol Roach7/11/2009

    interesting, not sure I understand it but interesting

  • Tina Twito7/10/2009

    Nicely done. Such unique imagery!

  • Shirley Mandel7/10/2009

    OOOO snakes! Wonderful contrast in this poem.

  • Kristie Leong M.D.7/10/2009

    Very unique and nicely written. I like the Friday haiku idea. It could be a weekly feature. :-)

  • Deonils7/10/2009

    thanks Greenhill ... I will stop teasing now. Forgive me , and I did make typos in my comment tp prove yur points. John Smither, great to see u again. May I travel in or ON your suitcase?

  • Greenhill7/10/2009

    Alright Neil!! I know you that you know when I spelled your name incorrectly it was a typo! We all make them right?! Yes, I know U of MD - my father had a big ceramic from when he went there - and yes, no Phelps!

  • John Smither7/10/2009

    Nice haiku!

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