Full Rattle, Deep Battle

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From the Babylonian sky

Hammurabi met death

When heavy metal rolled

Full rattle

Hammurabi met death

On biblical sand

Full rattle

The mighty eagle attacked

On biblical sand

Swiftly and efficiently

The mighty eagle attacked

Introducing a new concept

Swiftly and efficiently

And called it deep battle

Introducing a new concept

Bringing high tech

And called it deep battle

Cutting off command and control

Bringing high tech

J-stars releasing J-dams

Cutting off command and control

Sending Nebuchadnezzar into confusion

J-stars releasing J-dams

Double talon striking

Sending Nebuchadnezzar into confusion

Marching on Jerusalem

Double talon striking

Black boot stomping

Marching on Jerusalem

When Hammurabi met death

Black boot stomping

From the Babylonian sky

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  • Marsha Coles1/3/2008

    Very Very good. I enjoyed this very much, good job.

  • Lisa Renee.1/1/2008

    Amazing! I really like this one...very powerful phrasing!

  • Kady Burney12/31/2007

    Oh my Gosh, this is really really really really GOOD!

  • Kady Burney12/31/2007

    WOW!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!! Did I say WOW???!!!!! WOW!!!!!!

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