Fuming Love

mimpi
Your wrath hits me dead right

Where it hurts the most

I am left with sweet smothers

Lingering pains of fuming fury

The fury that tells that you care the most

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Mimpi (Mou D) is freelance writer who writes to express her thoughts and views on this enriching journey of life. She is always looking forward to learn and share her insights while living life to the fullest.  View profile

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  • mythman2/27/2009

    Very good for opening a dialog about Eternal Love! http://is.gd/l8ys

  • C-Love1/16/2009

    Applause

  • Donald Pennington12/12/2008

    ...wow...

  • Cynthia Martin12/8/2008

    This is cool, you should read the one I wrote "Love Boiling Mad"! This poem reminded me of the one I wrote. Thanks, Cyn

  • Shriniket Sarkar11/16/2008

    That was nice. I mean it seem that you have a good understanding of love. Well you made me change some of my understandings of love, dont worry of course in a positive aspect .Thanks for it and i wish i could here more on this topic from you.

  • jcorn11/10/2008

    Revisiting this one...worth rereading!

  • jayanti raman11/8/2008

    Great Poem and to the point.Best of Luck.

  • Kristie Leong M.D.11/8/2008

    Your poems always evoke such powerful imagery. Beautifully expressed! Keep them coming.

  • Sofya Blinder11/7/2008

    I loved this. Thanks :)

  • Linda Ann Nickerson11/2/2008

    Too often true. Well said.

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