Garden! Oh Garden!

Donna Thacker
Garden oh Garden,
Please won't you grow?
I've tried everything
I possibly know

I weed and I water
I feed you just so,
But garden Oh garden
You refuse to grow!

You wilt and you wither,
Or just refuse to sprout
Garden Oh Garden
You fill me with doubt.

They said it was easy
You'd be lush and green
Garden Oh Garden
You're being so mean.

While others are bragging
Of their bounty and such
Garden Oh Garden
I just don't say much

Garden Oh Garden
That I started from seeds
Why is that...
You'll only grow weeds!

Published by Donna Thacker - Featured Contributor in Lifestyle

Donna is an award- winning fiction author, recently published with Twin Trinity Media. While she enjoys writing fiction, Donna also has a knack for writing informative articles that show her knowledge and p...  View profile

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  • Wiley Vaughn5/10/2010

    Gardens rarely do as they are told.

  • Debra Bartshe3/28/2010

    Love the poem! I can definitely relate. I would like to ask you how you're getting your poetry in the correct format. When I posted my poem it posted each line evenly spaced instead of four line stanzas like it was supposed to be.

  • Allana Calhoun (Tink)3/23/2010

    Wonderful little poem! Can totally relate to it too. Although, 50% of the reason of failure on my part is forgetfulness (as in watering, etc.)

  • Steven West3/21/2010

    Very funny. Poem kind of grows on you.

  • JerseyNana3/17/2010

    Hope they listen and start giving you a bumper crop!

  • Emily Patterson3/17/2010

    Way too cute! ;o)

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky3/17/2010

    Fun!

  • Donna Thacker3/17/2010

    Lol on the photo Sheri! I was looking for one of weeds, I guess the one above decided to hitch a ride!

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper3/17/2010

    lol, your photo though belies your statement :)

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