Ghazal - an Acre to Work in the Land of Nod

A Poem About Gardening

J L Carey Jr
The old embrowned tractor plows in this garden,

While my sons world falls away... save this garden.

Something inviting comes from the turning earth.

The worms whisper, love - come home to this garden.

Soon the bee will oscillate about the corn,

A droned fertility god in this garden.

He digs in the dank soil like and atavist

Who seeks the clay of our bones in this garden.

I am a child in the brotherhood of blood;

J. C. - our lot still toils... East of This Garden.

Published by J L Carey Jr

J L Carey Jr, Author of the book Turning Pages, is a writer and an artist living in Michigan with his wife and three children. He holds an MFA in Creative Writing from National University and a BA in Englis...  View profile

The land of Nod comes from Genesis 4, the story of Cain and Abel, "So Cain went out from the Lord's presence and lived in the Land of Nod, East of Eden."

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  • george chavez3/26/2010

    This is a wonderful composition. "While my sons world falls away...save this garden." Powerful, my favorite line in this piece.

  • Tony Payne3/24/2010

    Very good.

  • Maria Roth3/23/2010

    Beautiful and haunting.

  • Heather Kristina Thomas3/23/2010

    Wow! I got chills...this poem is wonderful :)

  • Paul Rance3/23/2010

    Brilliant. This might just be your best poem, Jeff. Love the lines about the worm and bee. Without either, humanity would be screwed!

  • Harriet Steinberg3/22/2010

    Very well done.

  • Shaheen Darr3/22/2010

    wonderful! love your use of words in this :))

  • Rebecca3/22/2010

    Beautiful. Nothing is more therapeutic and lovely than gardening, in my opinion. Especially when it is shared with someone you love.

  • Linda Louise Johnson3/22/2010

    "embrowned tractor" -- and other phrases you use are mindstickers!

  • Faye Fairley3/22/2010

    awesome......:)

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