Gift Unseen

A Love Poem

Vikas D. Reddy
In this box, my love,

you will not find a ring,

but instead, a brave little bee.

he was all I could bring.

He'll be dead by morning,

having given his life,

defending his flowers against me

where they grew beside the sea.

They grew wild along the shores,

in hopes of an afternoon bouquet for you,

but I grieved this little bee's sting,

more from him than you.

I knew the full sacrifice he paid,

for just my small pain,

but I allowed him his victory,

leaving his flowers as a memory, flushed in the rain.

I brought you no flowers,

nor a beautiful ring,

but something this world lacked,

that this bee sought to bring.

I brought you instead,

this brave little bee.

Who proves there is love,

For even the smallest of things.

Published by Vikas D. Reddy

Vikas is a medical student, martial artist, and a long-time gamer. He has practiced Tae Kwon Do, Kendo, and boxing for over seven years. Vikas is currently a writer and co-editor for his college magazine...  View profile

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  • Mandi Smith10/19/2009

    i really like that you take a totally different way of looking at something like this. nice imagery, great poem!

  • Melissa Lawson11/29/2008

    Beautiful concept.

  • Lucky M. Diaz11/25/2008

    Interesting concept, bee in a box. I like it!

  • jobythebay11/18/2008

    I like it. Glad I found you on the thread...

  • Zira11/16/2008

    Hey loved this!

  • Ulla Kelly11/15/2008

    that is truly beautiful

  • Kristie Leong M.D.11/12/2008

    This poem was very moving. You have real talent.

  • Megan Mitchell11/12/2008

    I really enjoyed this! Nice job!

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