Giveaway

Patrick W. Marsh
Not that this town did not know,
the truth of learning though.

In some faraway fantasy not mired
in beasts and maidens retold beyond reason,
is the town of Giveaway.
Surrounded by mountains, like bullies, or old
relatives who grow in opinion but shrink in stature.
Towering, stormy, sparkling, and lovely with snow
they surround the city solidly and concretely.
In the town of Giveaway there is an academy,
where every mystery is marked and made.
Where matter is bent, twisted, gridded, and girded.
Stars are captured, monsters made, skin melted to iron,
machines sentient, all those wild images,
they're all there.
Famous Gear-makers whirl and build,
moving armor, flying and time machines,
floating castles, underground pyramids,
hidden portals to hell, heaven, purgatory, space, and other stars.
Interviews with the prophets, fiends, and legends.
They're all there, in the town of Giveaway.
Until the snow came, more snow
then was ever measured before,
they needed to leave their town in whatever shape
or form they could, the snow would collapse everything.
It was an endless storm, from an endless source.
But they couldn't leave the secrets there, the learning there.
The people would not leave the learning town.
They stayed to cherish the hallowed school.
For the sake of learning's course
all the people stayed.
Until in time,
only things moving in the streets
around the towering stone academy
more cathedral then school,
where hints of streetlights flickering
beneath the white and serene tomb.
A lullaby of lost equations mired
with suffocated screams.

Not that this town did know,
the truth of learning though.

Published by Patrick W. Marsh

A science fiction fantasy writer from Minnesota. Currently finishing the final draft of a novel and publishing consistently on Associated Content. Completely obsessed with creative writing and producing wri...  View profile

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  • Mary Oberg3/16/2011

    thought provoking poem

  • joan marie3/12/2011

    You certainly have the gift of words. Flowed nicely,

  • Delicia Powers3/11/2011

    Very moving and beautiful...

  • Albert R. Rustebakke3/10/2011

    Pat, this is Rusty, A. R. Rustebakke. I read the above fragment, and could critique/edit a bit. But II hesitate to do so, unless I know such would be welcome. I would welcome your doing the same with what I publish on Associated Content.

    I lived at 3709 Baring St. in St. Paul from '57-'59, but am now firmly planted where I daily view the Sandia Mtns out my front window. Minnesota was too cold for me and I left rapidly, despite choosing to live and work there. Til I know more than you came up on my account as a fan,

    Rusty

  • Lori Gunn3/9/2011

    back for a second read- very deep and enticing write

  • Lori Gunn3/9/2011

    excellent ♥ thanks for sharing

  • Laura Cone3/9/2011

    super

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