Good Bye My Friend..........

Dedicated To: Lori Marie Finney-Phelps

Deneale K. Williams

I had a best friend,

I always thought she cared.

She always makes our friendship end-

And acts like she is scared.

We have been friends since we were little,

I don't know why she does it,

But she puts people in the middle.

She tells lies to get herself a new friend,

And tosses the old friend to the curb-

This isn't her first time making our friendship end,

She doesn't care, just so long as she's heard!

I always used to let her come back,

I don't know why I do it;

This time there is no going back!

I have been hurt for the last damn time,

I won't let her near me again-

That's why I'm writing this rhyme;

So she can know she will never win!

I no longer have a friend like her,

I no longer care what she does with her life;

I don't care if she even grows more fur!

This marks the end of my friendship with you my dear,

So don't look my way, don't call me-nothing!

I don't care what you have to say, I don't care what I hear,

You made this choice; you can't blame anyone, or anything!

Today I grew up and woke up all at the same time,

I don't care how bad you screw up anymore-

Do your own thing, whatever it is, even if it's crime!

My heart was broken the other day,

Now I have decided to move on without you;

This is the way you wanted to play!

This is how much our friendship meant to you!

Good bye my friend............

Published by Deneale K. Williams

I love to read, write, do crafts and spend time with friends and family. It has been said that I am loud and outgoing. I'm open minded, and honest. Family first. I love my family, I love helping others too!...  View profile

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  • Martin Kloess5/30/2010

    Just wrote a sonnet. It not on exactly on the sam subject, but thought you might be interested "My Friend". Hope you have some time.
    Martin

  • Richelle Hawks9/7/2007

    good lord

  • Mommy2Lots9/6/2007

    Joyce, I don't know either of them in person, but from what I see here on AC, I think Deneale is a very good person and did not deserve such rude treatment from someone she cares about so much. However, judging from Lori's comments, I can now see that she may have some mental issues or just hurt from the past, and all of her actions may not entirely be her fault. Basically, I think everyone deserves a second chance and I truly hope that Deneale and Lori can one day heal their friendship. :-)

  • Mommy2Lots9/4/2007

    Thanks for the message and insight into what's going on. I don't blame you at all for her remarks. :-)

  • Mommy2Lots9/1/2007

    Sorry this happened to you two. I hope things mend someday. I guess this would explain the rude comments from Lori on my articles, although I'm not sure why she felt I (someone neither of you have met in person) was to blame? Oh, well. Anyway, I'm truly sorry to see an obviously once good relationship end so badly.

  • A-9/1/2007

    Like my mom used to say,
    "Better to be alone than in bad company"!

    Sorry you lost a friend.

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