Goodbye My Love

A Poem

Stormy Rayne
I didn't get
to say goodbye.
No final kiss
no reason why.

So now I fear
you'll always be
attacking my heart
with bitter memories.

My Superman
I won't recall.
The pain you caused
erased it all.

A piece of solace
you refuse to give.
In selfish desire
you choose to live.

Goodbye my love
I have to say.
The day you left
my heart turned gray.

Published by Stormy Rayne

I write in order to say all the things in life that I can't say out loud. At times it is much easier to explain emotions in written form than verbal. Writing has been my release since I was about 11 and con...  View profile

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  • Lee Wright1/26/2010

    very powerful

  • Julie Darleen1/20/2010

    So sad...

  • Catherine Spencer1/19/2010

    Life will go on and maybe be better! beautiful poem, even though it is so sad.

  • Allana Calhoun (Tink)1/18/2010

    Bittersweet. Beautiful writing!

  • Tricia Sabol1/17/2010

    Truly beautiful writing.

  • Dan Reveal1/16/2010

    Great writing, Laura!

  • JerseyNana1/15/2010

    So sorry you were hurt, Laura!

  • David A. Reinstein, LCSW1/15/2010

    Love hurts... but not as much as it not being returned ...

  • R.K. LoBello1/15/2010

    Pain can erase the good memories, can't it? Hope you can move on and find someone better.

  • Rhonda ODonnell1/15/2010

    Very emotional. Good poem.

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