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  • Agnes Farside6/26/2009

    So sad.

  • Dina Quirion5/13/2009

    Wow, that was great.

  • Shirley Mandel5/8/2009

    So sad. You convey the message well.

  • Lucky M. Diaz5/8/2009

    Very good.

  • J L Carey Jr5/7/2009

    You created a strong image with your haiku.

  • John Smither5/6/2009

    Very well written haiku!

  • Dawn Reavis5/5/2009

    A powerful Haiku. Excellent!

  • Cathy A Montville5/5/2009

    I hope this is not you.....I am not sure! Very touching!

  • 3lilangels5/5/2009

    well said!!

  • Sheryl Young5/5/2009

    I'm not much at judging haikus, but the last line here is striking.

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