HAI!

Susan Elliott
Evenings here, Konichiwa!
The gajin came to town.

Itadakimasu opens.
Serving ocha all around.

Itame holds in his hand
suribachi, surikogi.

While geta waits till orders up,
Una-don, norimaki, ebi.

Omakase for best friends
tazuna rolls, sashimi.

Futomaki won't be enough
the gajin still are hungry.

Yum, Yum, so good hai?
Okonomi, ocha more?

Domo arigato,domo.
Gochiso-sama, sure!

*This poem was originally published in Visions. It can also be seen on my poetry blog at http://susanspoeticblogosphere.blogspot.com/

Published by Susan Elliott

Susan Elliott's poetry has appeared in both print and online formats. Susan has recently published her first two Kindle books: Wandering Through a Barely Functional Mind and Ink Blots on Paper.  View profile

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  • Bridgitte Williams2/17/2010

    LOL!! :-) This is very cute and clever!

    Made my morning, hai!!!
    I favorited you. Enjoyed. I may actually get the courage to try this dish one day. Everyone says it is delicious. I am a bit sushi shy...hehe.

  • Shaheen Darr2/12/2010

    lol, wonderful...all I know is sushi..

  • Christopher James Patton2/12/2010

    Living in S. Korea and having visited Japan makes this hilarious! Well-done =-)

    If you getta chance check out my new piece, As Descartes. cheers!

  • Susan Elliott2/12/2010

    LOL! Yes..I am completely fluent in SUSHI! LOL! No, I looked up all the words when I wrote this. *:9)

  • Ruth Carter2/12/2010

    Love this, Susan! I did not realize that you were so fluent in Japanese! You need to teach me. :)

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