non-traditional haiku
dis-ease spreads through clouds:
five hours past midnight, fire-tinged
clouds: peace or disease
P.S. As I was driving from Baltimore to Washington, D.C. after 5 am this morning, I saw these beautiful clouds and gave praise. But I also remembered the forecast about a hot, muggy day with later asurance of rain. This is the result of my vision and revision -- my hybrid haiku.
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7 Comments
Post a CommentGood daily haiku!
Enjoyable haiku!
Love the double meaning of the first word.
Full of excitement! TX
thanks so much Cathy and Greenhill! Shalom and pleasant, bliussful weekend to you both (and your families).Neil
Hybrid haiku....I love that! Have a super weekend, Neil!
Very nice and have a nice weekend Neil and family!