Haiku (non-traditional Friday Haiku 7/17/2009)

Nature and Nuture in Me Day by Day

Deonils
non-traditional haiku

dis-ease spreads through clouds:

five hours past midnight, fire-tinged

clouds: peace or disease

P.S. As I was driving from Baltimore to Washington, D.C. after 5 am this morning, I saw these beautiful clouds and gave praise. But I also remembered the forecast about a hot, muggy day with later asurance of rain. This is the result of my vision and revision -- my hybrid haiku.

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I became a teacher in South Africa; since then I have worked in government, schools and higher education. My small business utilises my teacher-training & adult literacy interests/skills.  View profile

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  • John Smither7/23/2009

    Good daily haiku!

  • Tony Vega7/18/2009

    Enjoyable haiku!

  • Tina Twito7/18/2009

    Love the double meaning of the first word.

  • Roberta Baxter7/17/2009

    Full of excitement! TX

  • Deonils7/17/2009

    thanks so much Cathy and Greenhill! Shalom and pleasant, bliussful weekend to you both (and your families).Neil

  • Cathy A Montville7/17/2009

    Hybrid haiku....I love that! Have a super weekend, Neil!

  • Greenhill7/17/2009

    Very nice and have a nice weekend Neil and family!

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