Haiku Poem Celebrate Life

My First Haiku..Feedback Welcome!

Ranee Wright
Haiku Poem Celebrate Life

I hope you enjoy this haiku as much as I enjoyed creating it!

Watch with wonderment
Each discovery is new
Senses awaken.

Like a seed sprouting
Reaching toward the sky up high
Innocent blossoms.

Amazing nature
Embracing exploration
Experience life.

Protector and proud
Love, enjoy watching you grow
Beautiful babies.

(Inspired by My Two Beautiful Children:)

Published by Ranee Wright

Professional writer; movie and music connoisseur. Featured Movie Contributor on Associated Content. Featured computer and internet contributor on Xomba.  View profile

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  • Bobbi Leder11/19/2009

    Great poem but it's not exactly in haiku format. I just learned about the haiku format so don't feel too badly. ;-)

  • Tricia Sabol10/10/2009

    Beautifully done!

  • Dave Schrader10/9/2009

    I think it would make a great gift for your children too. Lovely! :)

  • Catherine Spencer10/9/2009

    Beautiful haiku, Ranee! You should have it framed it for your children :)

  • Tony Vega10/9/2009

    The total presentation was fantastic..the haiku complimented themselves very nice.

  • Julie Darleen10/8/2009

    Lovely. I especially like the parts about the blossoms and growing and the joy of embracing exploring. Very nice.

  • Rebecca Caroll10/8/2009

    Oh Ranee! Wonderful Haiku! Beautiful!

  • ADSpencer10/8/2009

    How sweet! Nice job.

  • E.D. Watts10/8/2009

    i like the last one a lot, nice job

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