Haiku and Sen'ryu

A Nature Poem, and My Cat Features in the Haiku that is Really a Hybrid, Called Sen'ryu

Deonils
(i) haiku (without direct human presence)

fields turn green from brown
butterflies hover, first blooms ...
wild cat jumps: one less

(ii) sen'ryu (my cat)
My cat knows his rights:
Can-openers scream "tuna"
And then ... I must play!

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I became a teacher in South Africa; since then I have worked in government, schools and higher education. My small business utilises my teacher-training & adult literacy interests/skills.  View profile

  • two haiku- about cats. Although the first is strictly haiku (nature-poem) ; the second is a sen'ryu
  • since it is also about me while being about my cat, Sonny.
Sonny hears any can being opened and he demands to know if it is tuna! He is a smart fellow and insists he be treated as a human person. At age 11 he can jump really high with his toy (strings) that he places in my hand as often as possible.

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  • Deonils4/25/2009

    Thanks for your supportive/encouraging/flaterring comments and visist. They mean a lot to me, Keoni and Sandra. Shalom/Peace/Happiness

  • Sandra Essary4/25/2009

    omigosh, I just love that first one -- one less... how clever.

  • Keoni Paakaula-Cox4/25/2009

    great poem

  • Deonils4/24/2009

    Rae Lynne Morvay= good to see you. I shall return the favor. Shalom/Blessings

  • Deonils4/24/2009

    thank you John Smither and Greenhill, from one lone catlover among dog lovers who know heaven. Take care--blessings for a sunny, safe and successful weekend.

  • Rae Lynne Morvay4/24/2009

    Very nice job!

  • Greenhill4/24/2009

    Very good poem, love it!!!

  • John Smither4/24/2009

    No notifcation through email to say you have been published, good writing. Nice Haiku/sen'ryu.

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