Haiku Tu U (Tuesday's Haiku is on Time)

Deonils

cold, ice and music

from above: a cloud shatters -

geese land ... silent lake

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I became a teacher in South Africa; since then I have worked in government, schools and higher education. My small business utilises my teacher-training & adult literacy interests/skills.  View profile

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  • Deonils11/19/2009

    thank you all saints so much! I saw this loud, orchestral cloud of geese break up , as they came in for landings in various stages. Then they all fell silent! (Guess, they did not have to talk or warn others not to land on themselves any longer!) Shalom and have a nblessed day--week--Thanksgiving!

  • Linda Louise Johnson11/18/2009

    Just now getting to Tuesday's articles. Haikuse me. I love this one --
    "a cloud shatters." Beautiful.

  • Shirley Mandel11/18/2009

    You did it again. You managed to captivate me!

  • Tony Vega11/18/2009

    Beautifully done

  • Memmay Moore11/17/2009

    Punctual and pleasant.

  • Abby Greenhill11/17/2009

    Very good, I feel the cold!

  • Janet Hunt11/17/2009

    Oh, I love this one! :-)

  • John Smither11/17/2009

    Thanks for these Tuesday haiku's.

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