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  • Branwen6610/21/2009

    This is one of the best haiku poems I've read in a long time.

  • Tina Twito10/14/2009

    Paints a picture. Love the umbrella metaphor.

  • Linda Louise Johnson10/14/2009

    poor old weak sun, he keeps trying! Thanks friend.

  • Carol Roach10/13/2009

    locust tree I have never seen one

  • Tony Vega10/13/2009

    Fantastic haiku..you've outdone your self w/your last two publications.

  • Jedley Manimtim10/13/2009

    Great job as always

  • Roberta Baxter10/13/2009

    This dances with lots of great things. I like rain and like your Haiku!

  • Abby Greenhill10/13/2009

    sun - all we getg is rain!

  • John Smither10/13/2009

    Great haiku summing up the weather at this time of year.

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