Haiku (untitled: Grapes)

Tina Twito
The curve and curl of
grape stems on the windowsill,
long after the grapes.

Published by Tina Twito

I'm 39, with a wonderful husband (in Iowa), and a daughter who lives in NC with her hubby (love them both!). I write mostly children's stories and poetry (rhyming poetry, traditional poetry, haiku, but mostl...  View profile

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  • Heather Kristina Thomas9/14/2009

    I love it! Well penned :)

  • Walton S. Tissot9/9/2009

    Well done. says it well.

  • Branwen669/4/2009

    What a brilliant metaphor for yearning... Great job!

  • Tina Twito9/4/2009

    Thanks all! Glad you enjoyed. Hope you got your grapes Bridgitte and Steven!

  • Brian Schultz9/2/2009

    ;-)

  • Bridgitte Williams9/2/2009

    I LOVE!! Wonderful haiku. I can see those grapes...and long for them...lol.
    Enjoyed.

  • Tikuli Dogra9/2/2009

    :) only you could have seen the unseen beauty and capture it so well ..great one

  • Steven West9/1/2009

    Nice Haiku. Now I'm hungry for some grapes.

  • Tina Twito9/1/2009

    Thanks so much! I never know if what seems striking to me will carry over to others. Your comments mean a lot!

  • J L Carey Jr9/1/2009

    This is a beautiful haiku.

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