Haiku-Untitled (Slash)

Tina Twito
Slash and dash morning:
sunlight promise marred with pain--
ripped from sleep and skin.

Published by Tina Twito

I'm 39, with a wonderful husband (in Iowa), and a daughter who lives in NC with her hubby (love them both!). I write mostly children's stories and poetry (rhyming poetry, traditional poetry, haiku, but mostl...  View profile

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  • J L Carey Jr2/18/2011

    Great job Tina.

  • Marie Saxton2/17/2011

    Wow, great job making a slammed finger sound even more painful, glad you're okay!

  • Bethany R. Marsh2/17/2011

    Powerful!

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky2/17/2011

    OOOOh, good one!

  • Martin Kloess2/16/2011

    very good

  • Harriet Steinberg2/16/2011

    Interesting!!!!!

  • Sharon Pfohl2/16/2011

    ouch! glad your typing finger is ok!

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