as the moon met the clouds with a meaningful glare.
The children were chuckling as they ate their candy,
and adults, with their apathy, were unknowingly unaware.
At first, no one was frightened, before the fire burned with force,
before the screaming and the shocking shrills of sacrilege.
But no one imagined an irreversible rendering of illness,
such as this dooming deviant of damage.
He was a beast, no less, because beneath his breast,
his breathing boomed with a thud.
As he thrashed towards the tree-line, he tackled a toddler,
and made a monstrous mess consisting of blood-clouded mud.
Shivers spun through the streets like a spider's web,
like a carefully crafted thorn of craze.
The gossiping gasps by gracious bystanders grew,
as tales of murder only contributed to the malicious maze.
The theory is that tragedy entrails
every Thursday night trick or treat.
If you see the flame, you'll know to be frightened,
for the ferocious freak is determined to eat.
In case you reminisce, do not run;
there's no shame in staying inside.
Before you jest, just remember the toddler,
that was turned into a Halloween treat and died.
Published by Brandon Elliott
17 Years Young // Writer // Intelligent // Knowledge-Seeking // Poetic Because I Can Be // twitter.com/brandonrofl // brandoniswrite.com // View profile
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8 Comments
Post a CommentCreepy. Great wordplay!
Wow harsh but well written.
This is very nice. I liked the way you used your words correctly. And how the poem flowed through out the paragraphs. Great job!!
Great job on this eerie piece. I'm glad to see something new from you.
Disturbingly excellent.
This was awesome Brandon! Nice work!
Damn, this was dope! Seriously, this rocks, and the ending is so tongue-in-cheek spooky! Brilliant!
A wonderful weaving of words. Poetic Portent. Excellent poetry!