Heart and Soul Demolished

A Sonnet

Theresa Wiza
Does a heart feel itself breaking inside?
Can it bear to be open and swollen?
I wanted your love; I hate that you lied
and I can't bear to see my life stolen.

You've taken from me my essence, my life
As you chiseled away my broken heart.
You told me I was your lover, your wife.
Bitter pieces shred as they break apart.

You choose not to think we'd been together
Though pictures of our children line your walls
While together I always felt tethered
to the deception that you don't recall.

In the end why would I think that you cared
as my soul lay splayed, ripped open, and bared.

Published by Theresa Wiza

Surviving breast cancer. Winner of FIRST EVER Writer's Digest Script Notes Spinoff Contest. Spiritual, creative, compassionate, inventive. Lots of children & grandchildren who are all the loves of my life....  View profile

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  • Paul Rance6/20/2011

    A broken heart always fuels the creative mind... Have only been able to comment on two of five of your articles viewed today. Glitches can break your heart, too. I know, slightly exaggerating...

  • Joanne Lynch6/6/2011

    Wow Theresa, so honest, so open...so good.

  • Han Van Meegerin6/6/2011

    I'm back for another read.

  • Effi L. Donovan6/1/2011

    Well done Theresa.

  • Cathy A Montville5/16/2011

    Just wanted you to know how much I liked your article about perception! I wish we could comment again on health articles. You made an interesting point about a crime scene -- how a short and tall woman's description of a suspect would vary. Brilliant observation! :)

  • Jeanne Baney5/16/2011

    The pain is so out there. It clutches my heart.

  • Shana Dines5/15/2011

    I hate to say that I can relate. It is a horrible experience and you expressed it very well. I am so sorry that you have experienced this too.

    I tried to leave a comment on your article on perceptions. It was also excellent and so true. It is amazing how different our perceptions can be, even in families where we grow up with the same parents.

  • Bethany Marsh5/15/2011

    Very powerful and sad poem.

  • Jack Wellman5/12/2011

    This is just raw emotion in the greatest sense. Wow...you really know how to write from the (broken?) heart.

  • Han Van Meegerin5/12/2011

    THeresa, you really make us feel the pain. Well done.

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