Her Baby Needed Milk

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Screw Driver was a base head
Paranoia consumed him
Coke stroking had fried his mind
He lived with Trinda on the 8th floor

Paranoia consumed him
Household funds were missing
He lived with Trinda on the 8th floor
She began to question

Household funds were missing
Screw Driver wasn't employed
She began to question
He became abusive

Screw Driver wasn't employed
He liked smoking mo mos
He became abusive
Trying to strong arm Trinda

He liked smoking mo mos
Screw Driver's tone got louder
Trying to strong arm Trinda
Her baby needed milk

Screw Driver's tone got louder
Dope was calling him
Her baby needed milk
There was only half a bottle

Dope was calling him
Above baby's hunger cry
There was only half a bottle
Trinda went to the store

Above baby's hunger cry
Screw Driver tried to baby sit
Trinda went to the store
Screw Driver couldn't stand the noise

He tried to baby sit
The high pitches wouldn't stop
Screw Driver couldn't take the noise
He threw the toddler out the window

The high pitches wouldn't stop
Snapping off
He threw the toddler out the window
His time was going to come

Snapping off
Coke stroking fried his mind
He deserved to be whacked for that
Screw Driver was a base head

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I am an aspiring writer, mired in the world of social work. I have dreams of becoming a published author someday. I decided to start my own production because every writing job interview that I have had di...  View profile

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  • Kady Burney1/24/2008

    Will you sondeay write about the origin of your most awesome Kuniochi???? I also can't wait to read more about what happens to this Screw Driver character!

  • Kady Burney1/24/2008

    DONE!!!!! You have really come into your own and I think you know it! You've really got the talent, you really do! Keep that art coming!!!!!

  • Kady Burney1/24/2008

    OOOOOO, this is so sad!!!!! Also, I love the name Trinda, by the way!!!! This is amazing and so horribly sad. I felt my gut sort of wrench when I read this, because she lost her baby while Screw Driver was babysitting. This is so raw and real!!!!! I'm so sad that this happened, yet, I aptiently await his comeuppance!!!! WOW!!!!!! You really write with gusto and truth, because this sort of thing does happen in real life. Kevin, you've really found your golden muse here. You've really found your own vibe. You've created these characters and no matter whether they are happy, sad, good, or bad..they scream REALITY!!!! It is also amazing in turn that you create those who will right the wrongs, because in real life that does not always happen. Poems that you write about your Kuniochi give us all hope that there is something good left in the world that will right the wrongs and ills of mankind. YOU ARE AN ARTIST!!!!! WELL DONE!!!! I am as always, such a fan of your most amazing art!!!!! WELL

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