Her Fighting Style

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Origami shokaku

Folded paper flying crane

Her fighting style

Lithe shape shifter

Folded paper flying crane

Exciting, attractive

Lithe shape shifter

As water

Exciting, attractive

Destructive

As water

Steam, ice or liquid

Destructive

In these ways

Steam, ice or liquid

Flexible

In these ways

Her fighting style

Forceful intellect

Origami shokaku

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I am an aspiring writer, mired in the world of social work. I have dreams of becoming a published author someday. I decided to start my own production because every writing job interview that I have had di...  View profile

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  • Momie Tullottes5/23/2008

    Love the way this flows. :-)

  • Dr. Jamie Y. Marable5/4/2008

    Why do I hear music playing every time I read your work? A little bass - maybe a sax in the background. This is good stuff. Keep it coming!

  • Nancie Norton5/3/2008

    I have not read your work before, but I think I'm gonna like it! This is sooooo good....Thank You for sharing it with us all+*+*+* ~ PEACE ~

  • eiffelvu5/2/2008

    enjoyed this...many thanks

  • Kady the Hippie Woodstock5/2/2008

    OOOOOOO!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!! Wonderful job on this, Kevin!!!!! Amazing art that you have written!!!! The first fourth lines are POWERFUL!!!!! Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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