Her Reaction

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About her hair

My poem said "So sultry with your hair down."

Her reaction said she liked that

One day she was in a ponytail

My poem said "So sultry with your hair down."

This she remembered

One day she was in a ponytail

I asked her to come see me later

This she remembered

There was a knock at my door

I asked her to come see me later

Her hair covered one eye and was flowing down her back

There was a knock at my door

When I answered, she was grinning

Her hair covered one eye and was flowing down her back

I raised an eyebrow

When I answered, she was grinning

Her reaction said she liked that

I gave her compliments

About her hair

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  • Mandy Kaye5/28/2008

    i like this style but i can't quite seem to get it right

  • Momie Tullottes5/23/2008

    Love this. I agree with Nancie. :-)

  • A.M. Morgan5/21/2008

    Nice. Compliments go a long way.

  • Kady the Hippie Woodstock5/18/2008

    WOW!!!!!! Very nice again, Kevin!!!!! :)

  • Aly Adair5/18/2008

    So nice - love the pic again!

  • Nancie Norton5/18/2008

    I like this one, it's kind of intriguing. Good job!+*+*+*PEACE

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