Hidden (haiku)

Tina Twito

Dusk and shadows hide
gathered secrets from my lens.
But their eyes still shine.

Published by Tina Twito

I'm 39, with a wonderful husband (in Iowa), and a daughter who lives in NC with her hubby (love them both!). I write mostly children's stories and poetry (rhyming poetry, traditional poetry, haiku, but mostl...  View profile

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  • Branwen665/25/2012

    Open to so many meanings... It resonates with me today... Thank you!

  • Jeri Baker2/8/2012

    Very unique and wel written.

  • Sivaramakrishnan Ananthanarayanan12/9/2011

    Has deeper meanings; one can interpret in many ways - siva

  • Walton S. Tissot12/8/2011

    very cool ..it made me recall a tale my great grandma used to tell that i cant quite remember...
    something about flying squirrels or a creature similar. *****

  • Michele Starkey12/5/2011

    Awesome haiku to describe those creatures that come out after dark. We have a herd of deer that do the same thing here :) cheers!

  • Tina Twito12/1/2011

    I should probably explain that there are at least 4 deer in the picture. But all you can see are a few glowing eyes. Thought it would be fun to write a "poem based on an image" with a picture that didn't really happen.

  • rama devi (Nina Marshall)12/1/2011

    very unique and interesting :-)

  • J L Carey Jr12/1/2011

    cool... &)

  • Trisha Hodges11/30/2011

    Very thought provoking....

  • Harriet Steinberg11/30/2011

    A very unique haiku

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