Hide and Seek - a Rhyming Pique at Things Oblique

To Encourage a Genuine Friend, Who Has Admonished and Uplifted Me on Multiple Occasions

Linda Ann Nickerson
A friend loves at all times, and a brother is born for adversity.
(Proverbs 17:17)

Be courteous to all, but intimate with few,
And let those few be well tried
before you give them your confidence.
True friendship is a plant of slow growth,
and must undergo and withstand
the shocks of adversity
before it is entitled to the appellation.
(George Washington, 1732-1799)

I must admire your technique!
You hide or seek or take a peek,
And yet I hear the words you speak.

Ideals like destiny and fate
Have caused your heart to hesitate.
But wait! Perhaps it's not too late!

Alas, you've chosen to withdraw,
To set your face and lock your jaw,
Although soon comes the great spring thaw.

It's time to toss away that doubt,
To loose the binds and cast them out.
A new day dawns, so come on out!

A shiny glimmer crystal ball
Sheds just a shimmer, then a fall,
Enduring never, not at all.

You say you're idle, in a shell,
As if the world outside can't tell.
But it's a self-made prison cell.

The wolf, he howls outside your door.
He beckons you to blood and gore,
The ever-present carnivore.

The sharpest fangs that drip with dread,
Of those who'd keep you underfed
Can never harm you, sleepyhead.

For forces strong are standing near,
These multitudes, you cannot hear.
True trust can banish all your fear.

The dragon hovers, like a snake.
He hopes your soul to overtake.
And yet, you pray for Heaven's sake.

Somehow, you sense the answer deep,
As predators behind you creep.
Perhaps you sense it, as you weep.

For you are worthy of so much,
Although you crave the Master's touch.
For faith is never just a crutch.

There's no deposit, no return,
For folks like us have yet to learn
That grace and love we cannot earn.

An open heart can grab the Gift
That mends and fixes every rift
With everlasting mercy's lift.

Again, I treasure your technique,
Although it be a bit oblique
And wonder what it is you seek.

Published by Linda Ann Nickerson - Featured Contributor in Lifestyle and Sports

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  • Lori Piper1/7/2008

    I loved this... great job

  • Lisa Renee.1/5/2008

    Thank you, Linda, this is beautifully written. Amazing work!

  • Missy H.1/4/2008

    Very good. Thought provoking.

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky1/4/2008

    Thought provoking.

  • Kady Burney1/4/2008

    You are an awesome poet!

  • Elena H.1/2/2008

    Very thought provoking-makes one wonder-what kind of friend are we?

  • jcorn1/2/2008

    I agree with the last person that posted. This is not a poem to be read quickly or without taking time to savor. Thanks!

  • Lenora Murdock1/1/2008

    Awesome piece. Makes you think~

  • Coffee Mugg1/1/2008

    maybe they seek something they cannot have. very well written Miss Linda, very deep message here. wonderful job.Ken

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