How to Develop Interesting Fictional Characters

Melissa Matters
When thinking about favorite T.V. shows and novels, it's often the characters that make the story enjoyable. Just as we would plan out our plot, it's equally important to spend time crafting both believable and memorable characters. Use these tips to develop interesting characters in fictional stories.

Develop their Physical Appearance
A physical appearance is necessary for readers to connect to the character. Every time a new character in a story is introduced, their outward appearance needs to be mentioned. Sometimes, it is a good idea to devote an entire paragraph to describing the character's physical attributes.

For instance:
With shoulder length, dark hair and small brown eyes, Karen blended into the crowd. Karen wasn't fat; she wasn't thin. She wasn't tall; she wasn't short. She was just there. Her best attribute was her smile. Her teeth were straight and white. But, she had her parents to thank for that. They had spent thousands on braces. Indeed, all those years with a metal mouth had been worth it.

This description gives the reader a basic idea of what Karen looks like. In this way, they can connect to Karen better. The description also reveals that perhaps Karen does not have the best self-esteem and views herself as ordinary.

Idiosyncrasies
Those little annoying quirks and obsessive tendencies is what draws us to characters. While in real life, we may not like the person who eats loudly or clips their nails while waiting at Starbucks, these moments make for great character development. Is your character disorganized? Then, you should focus on his or her inabilities to find keys, a cell phone or even a resume at an interview.

Inner Monologue
Inner monologue is a great way to unveil your character's most innermost thoughts. For instance:
It's Saturday and Mr. Fisher is washing his car again.

Oh, no -- .he's wearing the short, shorts again. Why does he insist on wearing those when he is washing his car?
Quickly, I try to run to my sedan and open the door. But, he sees me.
Darn it.

Adding Details through Dialogue and Action
Throughout the story, characters should not be lost in the plot. For instance, an author should continue to reveal new personality and physical traits. Reveal an odd birthmark or burn scar during a trip to the beach. Is the character scared of heights? Can this be shown when two characters go to an amusement park?

When characters are talking, they should always be doing something. Whether a character is making coffee, perhaps their third cup of the day, or grooming their beard, each exchange of dialogue should be revealing.

Transformation
The main character should undergo some sort of transformation. If a character is selfish, the author needs to put them into a situation where he or she becomes less selfish. A trip to a third world country can be humbling or a tragic event can shape a person's life.

Not every character needs to undergo a change. It's not realistic. Some people can go through horrible circumstances and still be wonderful. Others will be jerks for their entire lives.

Suggested Reading
One of my favorite authors for character development is Douglas Coupland. Try reading Eleanor Rigby: A Novel for some wonderful character insight.

Sources:

Personal Experience

Published by Melissa Matters - Featured Contributor in Lifestyle

Melissa is a Stay at Home Mom with a BA in writing, CA teaching credential and a Masters in Education. She has taught many levels of education and loves writing. Also, dear to her heart are her faith, fam...  View profile

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  • Jeffrey L. Campbell8/12/2011

    This is great advice. Full development of a character seems to be lacking in too much of today's writing, making characters 2 dimensional.

  • Stephanie Jeannot7/29/2011

    Excellent tips

  • Sivaramakrishnan Ananthanarayanan7/6/2011

    It is not that easy for me, Melissa! It requires real effort and patience. But great tips that would help aspiring writers. I really loved the Transformation part! siva

  • Phyllis Wheeler7/4/2011

    Well done!

  • Becca Swanson6/23/2011

    Ooh, this was featured! Nice job :)

  • Lori Gunn6/19/2011

    excellent :)

  • Nancy P. Goodman, in Tennessee6/17/2011

    good , thanks!

  • Pam Williams6/15/2011

    LOVE these guideline. I have often wanted to write fiction but did not know where to begins. I now have my springboard. Thank you!

  • Bridgette Holley6/13/2011

    These are great tips! This article brought back great memories from when I used to write fan fiction in high school about a show called The X-Files.

  • Michele Starkey6/13/2011

    One day, I will have more time to write ~! cheers ;)

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