How it Feels to Be in a Cage

Deepak
Do you know how it feels

to be tied down in a cage

your voice muffled

your wings clipped

your feet made motionless

you can cry hoarse

you just cannot move

you just cannot fly

you just cannot meet anyone

you just cannot

behold beyond a limit

events unfolding in front of you

days in and days out

eyes glistening with hope

for a better tomorrow

you accept with disdain

whatever is offered to you

life appears to be

just dragging

hoping one day

the cage would

be opened

and you would

be able to fly

In the open sky

like a free bird

When I get up early in the morning my sight travels to my neighbour's balcony. There I find a bright green parrot with a red beak in a cage. He makes shrill cries as he is asking- "when will I come out of this cage?" I have tried to narrate his feelings in the cage.

Published by Deepak

I love to write articles/poems on topics of general interest. I prefer sharing my experiences of life with others. I like to share knowledge with others. I love to interact with others and love to read artic...  View profile

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  • mable8/15/2009

    very thought provoking!!!

  • Karen Chaffee8/12/2009

    This touches me deeply. I have known people who feels much as you've described this parrot. Excellent work.

  • Chaitra8/7/2009

    You are really a kind hearted.

  • Sree7/31/2009

    Nice to know that you can read bird's mind (lol) written wonderfully.

  • mimpi3/19/2009

    You have excelled in this. The poignancy is reflected through and so is your thoughtfulness. Loved it!

  • Anonymous2/1/2009

    THat's great Deepak.. very vivid...I like it.

  • Anonymous1/14/2009

    well, another great masterpiece from you..I am starting to be your fan now..

    aisaellis

  • Rae Lynne Morvay1/1/2009

    Very good job, that is so sad.

  • Mags12/19/2008

    Great power in these words!

  • mayka10/26/2008

    Written wonderfully. Thanks for sharing.

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