How to Haiku

Fun with Haiku

Doreen Bradley Satter, RN
A Haiku is the shortest poem in the world. It depicts a moment, sensation, impression or drama of a specific fact of nature--almost like a photo. Haiku speaks in parables of life.

There are several rules of Haiku, but the most important ones are that a Haiku must:

1. Have 3 short lines

2. Have a 'season' word known as a 'kigo'

3. Have one cutting word

4. Must have no rhyme or metaphor

5. Have a total of 17 syllables in lines of 5-7-5

These rules are for the stricter ancient Haiku. In modern English Haiku, variations of the 5-7-5 rule are accepted practice.

It is fun to dabble with Haiku. The following Haiku are written in original Haiku form:

Brittle vivid color
Precariously clinging--
Sapless branches drip

Tender shoots thrust upward
Trading white for green--
As sunbeams touch

Floating lily pads
Hide frogs croaking--
At circles of rain

Autumn's reds and golds
Reflecting in calm water--
Flow past my window

Sapless life
Slumbering beneath crusted white--
Dreams of rebirth

The red maple
Splatters blood over the grass--
As cold breezes blow

Geese squabble in formation
Fleeing icy death--
Swallowed into fog

The opossum prowls tonight
Bright harvest moon--
I lie awake

Try writing some of your own Haiku. One exercise that I enjoy is what I call 'Alphabet Haiku'. Start a new Haiku for each letter of the alphabet and do a series of 26. Here are some examples of Alphabet Haiku that I wrote:

APPLE--CRISP AND COLD
CLINGING FAST TO THE BARE BRANCH--
WAITING TO BE PICKED

BUMBLE BEE HIDING
DRINKING THE BLOSSOM'S SWEETNESS--
TOO DRUNK TO FLY AWAY

CORN STOCKS DRIED BY SUN
NOW ARE POPULAR DECOR--
HALLOWEEN'S COMING!

DOG FRISKING IN SNOW
ROLLING IN THE COLD SOFTNESS--
ANGELS WITHOUT WINGS

Now it's your turn. Have fun with Haiku!

Published by Doreen Bradley Satter, RN

DOREEN BRADLEY SATTER, RN is a mostly-retired Registered Nurse, Artist, Published Author and Freelance Writer and has been writing for the Yahoo! Contributor Network for several years. She has one published...  View profile

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  • Richard Davison11/21/2011

    I like your own Haiku and want to point out that your Haiku examples are much better, in my opinion, than the other examples you list. Just to give you inspiration, I'm saying this. You show that you love Haiku, and I will visit your Haiku web site listed in a reply to another person here. Thank you.

  • Kevin Sutherin10/13/2011

    Very nice job!

  • Verna Hendrickson8/6/2010

    Thank you. Your article helped me write my first haiku. I enjoyed your alphabet
    haiku.

  • Carolyn Cordon7/4/2010

    Lovely fun, thank you. You have depicted modern English language haiku, and also the fun of haiku.

  • Tim Searles10/9/2009

    That's cool. I like haikus.

  • Doreen Bradley Satter, RN8/13/2009

    Thank you all for your nice comments. If you are interested in reading more of my Haiku, visit my site, HAIKU GARDEN: http://riverwriter.tripod.com/haikugarden/

  • Doreen Bradley Satter, RN6/24/2009

    THANK YOU, Yumyugyul Ahmed!

  • Yumyugyul Ahmed6/24/2009

    Thank you for that amazing article! :)

  • Doreen Bradley Satter, RN4/26/2009

    Jamie, I went to your page and looked at your haiku, "Faith". It's beautiful! See, now you're on your way...I think it's really fun to write haiku!

  • Founding Editor4/26/2009

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