How to Write Twist in the Tale Short Stories

John Smither
I love to write short stories, to be able to get the message across that you trying to convey to your hopefully many readers is not an easy one. You cannot waste time (or words) dwelling on long build ups to the finale or crisis you are plotting to reveal. You also cannot waste words on giving your character (or characters) a long winded description of how they got themselves into the mess or situation they find themselves in at the time of your writing.

My favourite type of short story (or even full length novel) to write is the one with a twist in the tale. A key part to the art of telling this type of story successfully is to not reveal the crucial line or clues too early. The later on in the story, the better it will be. I currently have a short story listed called 'Billy' which emphasises the twist almost at the end of the last sentence. Give clues, but do not be too obvious. If readers can guess the outcome too soon it is not going to be an enjoyable experience for them. The outcome has to be believable, if it is too strange, weird or bizarre then again the reader may feel cheated upon their finishing the story.

Do not add a brand new character at the end as a way of solving or ending your story, it may seem like a quick solution but if you are going to use this type of scenario then go back into your story. Add something about this person at an earlier point in the tale; leave some false clues or hints. Lead the reader possibly towards another character. Make these two characters related in some form, either through a family connection, a past conflict, jealousy or any number of other topics to give your story some sort of reality.

Most importantly whenever you are writing about something write about what you know already, or go out and do your research. Only use complicated technical jargon if you fully understand the meaning of such jargon, and do not unnecessarily over complicate the story. Another important point for you to consider, enjoy writing about whatever subject you wish to write about, but remember if it is not fun for you to proof read, then will it be enjoyable for your potential readers?

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  • Madison P Woods4/2/2012

    Interesting....I love twist in the tale short stories, I made my attempt with 'The Man Who Could Not Cry' hopefully it has all the right qualities you listed above...but since I'm still learning - thanks for the tips!

  • bunce6/25/2009

    Interesting, i need help when writing my stories, i cant plan to save my life, and it ends up a string of great ideas that just dont work together.

  • Tiadora Anderson2/26/2009

    Good points John.

  • Cathy A Montville1/2/2009

    Great points....writing what I know is the only way I can write! If I have no knowledge of a topic...it is not for me. Research is fun and a learning process, but again, I will only "further" research what I already have some understaning of! Good stuff, John!

  • John Smither1/1/2009

    typo, sorry in the first line, it should read 'that you are trying to convey' hope this makes more sense.

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