I Am Your Cactus

Mandy Kaye
You are hot
You are tired
Your muscles over-worked
Sweat drips from your body
You are a man
I am your cactus

You are alone
You wander for miles
Your senses fail
Emptiness surrounds you
You are in need
I am your cactus

You see my blossoms
You taste my moisture
Your hands reach for me
A smile touches your heart
You are in love
I am your cactus

You are drained
You drop to the ground
Your lips quiver
The hot sun stings your pride
You are thirsty
And I am your cactus

Published by Mandy Kaye

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  • Shanelle Diaz12/4/2007

    Interesting, thanks. Also, it reminded me of a David Bowie song.

  • Mamacat Bijou9/11/2007

    Neat poem

  • William Pinn7/28/2007

    Nicely done!

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