I Come with a Warning Label

Jolynne M Hudnell
Unprotected purity given freely
My tangled heart relinquished

Resistance agonizingly maintained
To prevent your nevermore

Be forewarned, my scourge entails
Devastation unwittingly bestowed

Swirling mites of diamond dust
Revert to coal in my touch

Published by Jolynne M Hudnell

Jolynne is a part-time freelance writer and independently-published poet. Jolynne has knowledge and experience in a variety of topics. Jolynne enjoys singing and writing poetry. Her published work in...  View profile

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  • Julie Sapp2/1/2011

    Love it!

  • Kim Smith1/31/2011

    Very nice!!

  • rmharrington1/25/2011

    Great imagery.

  • Joshua Huffman1/25/2011

    Well done.

  • Ji Park1/25/2011

    Moving.

  • Tiffany Booth1/24/2011

    Great work! Thanks for sharing =0)

  • Angel Vee1/23/2011

    Good one!

  • Diane Z. Ciatto1/23/2011

    Wow, this is intense!!

  • Delicia Powers1/23/2011

    Wow, great poem of outstanding power and strength, beautiful work, thanks Jolynne!

  • Jack Wellman1/23/2011

    This is so very powerful and full of heartfelt emotions. You can so aptly describe in a few words what most of us could not in a book...and these are so real to me and to several, I bet they can identifiy with them.

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