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  • rama devi (Nina Marshall)2/28/2012

    Nice :)

  • Tom LaValley2/3/2011

    very well written sis, you can visualize the feelings and thoughts put into this poem. I like to write poems like this as well.

  • Cathy A Montville1/31/2011

    So few words... so hard to communicate! Well done!

  • James Fenelius1/30/2011

    Well done.

  • Delicia Powers1/27/2011

    Beautiful...

  • Diane Z. Ciatto1/27/2011

    So lovely, but sad that he could not say those words!!!

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