I Once Knew a Woman

Louisa Burgess

I once knew a girl
who danced in the rain
she sang and she marched
and new little pain

I once knew a woman
she held many convictions
in a world full of cynics
her idealism had no directions

This woman so carefree
full of youthful hope and desire
for a peaceful better world
wanted nothing more to transpire

A woman must change
if the world refuses to go along
to her girlish dreams
eventually she said so long

The woman who was
wild and free as could be
out-spoken and without worry
would have been me

Published by Louisa Burgess

Life long NYer. Expressing myself through the written word has been my lifelong hobby and vocation. Somehow I managed to raise two sons and actually worked for a living! Recently moved to Texas!Louisa Burges...  View profile

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  • Morton Templeton9/19/2008

    This was great and loved the last stanza, sort of feels like me.

  • Baconator9/14/2008

    Isn't it strange how life changes. It seems no matter how hard we try we are forced to let some parts of us die. It is actully rather sad.

  • Momma J9/10/2008

    I can really relate at this point in life!

  • Christine Bruness9/8/2008

    AW, I bet a couple shots of tequila and a good dance track would bring that ole girl back!

  • Tony Vega9/8/2008

    Very well done!

  • Sheryl Young9/8/2008

    Life happens...

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI9/8/2008

    A very nice poem..Thank you for sharing.

  • Sofya Blinder9/7/2008

    Hey this is kind of sad, I hope you didn't lose all of it :(

  • Nikki9/7/2008

    excellent poem!!

  • 3lilangels9/7/2008

    Awesome poem loved it!!

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