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I Once Perceived that Chaos Reined

For Emily Dickinson

J L Carey Jr
I once perceived that chaos reined
Though chaos had abated -
And long I sank - A vessel lost -
Beneath the placid sea -

To darker depths - So far removed
Dispirited was I -
While surface shimmered golden bright -
Treasure to disdain me -

Published by J L Carey Jr

J L Carey Jr, Author of the book Turning Pages, is a writer and an artist living in Michigan with his wife and three children. He holds an MFA in Creative Writing from National University and a BA in Englis...  View profile

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  • Johnny Yuma9/24/2009

    Great work J. L.. Johnny Yuma

  • RipDiction9/5/2009

    That last line always gets the head churning those gears...brilliant nice poem.

  • John Myers8/24/2009

    Great poem!

  • Walton S. Tissot7/29/2009

    very cool. I like E.D.. Hers is a sad tale indeed.

  • Jennifer Waite7/24/2009

    A very good effort here! I rather liked it :-)

  • Christine Bruness7/24/2009

    "Treasure to disdain me--" a haunting line....

  • Camille Atkinson7/22/2009

    I really like this one, short but it fulfilled its message

  • Shaheen Darr7/21/2009

    very well done! the contrasts were beautifully weaved together!

  • Ana Maria Alvarez7/20/2009

    Been waiting...This is a wonderful poem dedication. Your last line left me agreeable. :D

  • Elizabeth Valentine7/20/2009

    Oh wow, very nice!

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